Re: Request: critique Telynor site

In a message dated 2/7/2000 11:34:34 AM Central Standard Time, 
peekstok(at)u.washington.edu writes:

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 <A HREF="http://members.aol.com/telynor/">http://members.aol.com/telynor/</A>
 
 This is my band's web site. I'm preparing to redesign the site, and would
 appreciate input on what works/doesn't work in the present design,
 especially in regard to:
 
 * ease of use and navigation
 * professional appearance
  >>

Hi Anna!

I think your navigation is fine.......I love the repeat signs in your links 
at the bottom  :||:  They'd be even better on all your pages!

Appearance, first, I'd get my own domain. I think the picture and the text 
could be a little more balanced; the text is written well but the font 
style/size or something about the text seemed to outweigh the picture (I'd 
like to see that picture bigger too - its a great picture!) The balance on 
the reviews page is more pleasing.

There seem to be slight differences between all the pages (like the :||: in 
your navigation links). I don't know if I would have noticed that without 
looking at it for a critique request, but I think eliminating those 
differences would give a more cohesive feel to your site.

I see on the instruments page "there's more to come".  There are many more 
instruments mentioned on other pages I hope will be represented here soon!

I think its a very nice site. As a musician myself, I also find it very 
intelligent without being presumptuous.  (And I LOVED the sound clips!)

:o)
Sherill Maddox

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