RE: Critique of website.lineone.net/~john.cockerill/

Greetings John,

I do like your site (even if you leave out the Gap series). I really like
the method of navagation between the different books within one author.
And I love the way you give credit for each of the images on the Robert
Jorden page.

Many of the rules appear "tabbed" in towards the right.  I'm not sure if
you meant it to look this way, but I can't say these look bad.  On two
pages, however, they are indented even farther.  The Robert Jorden page has
the horizontal rules placed way to the right of all of the book covers.
The second one also acts as a link to the "Shadow Rising" page.  The
horizontal rule above the "The Second Chronicles..." title on the Donaldson
page is also way to the right.  On the about Donaldson page the image
srd-tsmd.jpg (Illearth Stone) comes out on top of the second horizontal
rule.

In addition, all of the pages for each book has an image of the cover
except Lord Foul's Bane.  Also, your navigation on the Robert Jorden pages
offers more options than the Donaldson pages (ie ICQ panel, guestbook)

I used Netscape 4.05 Mac 832x624.

Best of Luck
Ted

Theodore Edmond Snyder
Department of Entomology      Voice: 919-515-1820
NCSU, Box 7613
Raleigh NC 27695-7613         Fax: 919-515-7746
http://www4.ncsu.edu/~tesnyder/

...there has never seemed to be a taboo against pulling off
the legs or wings of flies.  Most children eventually outgrow
this behavior.  Those who do not either come to a bad end
or become biologists.
  --Vincent Dethier, _To Know a Fly_

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