Re: http://www.spectater.demon.co.uk/swell (URL WORKS!)
by "Robin S. Socha" <r.socha(at)control-risks.de>
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* Jackie Carey <jackie(at)spectater.demon.co.uk> writes:
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> It's a rapid refurb I'm doing - not getting much money so it's meant
> to be simple. However, I reckon it needs a little something. What
> do you think? The site owner loves it, but The Geyser thinks it's
> "too white".
Netscape 4.05, Linux, 1600x1200x32.
o Loads of broken links
o The images need re-doing: I would add transparency and I would
downsize them - heavily, especially the navigation map. You just
might even consider using a frames solution (I don't like them but
they would make sense IMO)
o The server is slow as heck - unusual for Demon I'd say, but I only
got ~500k
o I would run the site through a validator. Apart from the fact that
some fonts don't even exist on any of my Dos boxes, some of the code
looks proprietay
o "too white" is a nice understatement. Add some pix eg of the tutors
or something
Robin
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