RE: Request critique for non-commercial web site

> I have just redesigned this web site. Could you please critique
> this site with.
> Diarmuid Ryan.           email:  dpryan(at)iol.ie
>              URL:    http://surf.to/diarmuids.home

Hello Diarmuid Ryan,

              Well I am going to keep this one short as possible as I only
looked at 3 pages in brief. Keeping in mind the Resolution below it goes as
follows:

1) Main Page, Last Link on left cut in half
2) Quicklink (top left pull down menu) the Arrow is cut off by 3/4.
3) Although Layout appears good the main page (personal thought Only) with
all the
        Links, colors, Different Colors, Whirling top deal etc. is really
kind of
        full. Maybe cutting down on some things and/or touching up a little
would
        bring out the felling more..
4) No DOC Type
5) Once on the pages (unless it was cutoff) there where no "Return". Not a
big deal
        until the Picture page then had to reload all 8 to get Back to main
page.

Picture Page.

1) No this I was really hoping on, (Like Scenic pictures) Last 3 did not
load, no       thumbs. 1st one quit loading half way, third on top quit.

File Page,

1) could be more but the first thing that got my eye was a "THITHIS". Need
to
        re-check spelling.

        All in all to comment a Phrase I us often, "I see your Thoughts"
that I can see, that there is not question on. Clean up a few things and all
will be cool. Drafts done, beta's good, just some touch ups needed..

Ben

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