re: http://www.hmex.ao.net/famed/index.html
by "Astrid Miller" <astrid1(at)iinet.net.au>
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Hello Craig,
Took my Pentium 11, 300Mmx, with 128MB SD RAM, 32 bit Windpws 95, and MSIE
5.0 (The new developers beta release), for a visit.
It all looks pretty good, except that your text begins alongside the
"Events" button. Because of the spacing required by this graphic, there is
irregular spacing between the first two lines (which are inside the table)
and the rest of the text, which looks unprofessional. I see from your
source code that you did this on purpose, I have to ask WHY ? I would
suggest you place all of the text flush left underneath the table/buttons.
Personally I find your main colour combination (Just tan and blue) a little
bland - but that's just me ! I found all your pages to be consistent and
fast loading - nice and easy to navigate. All your links come up as either
green or light blue as you obviously designed them to do. I also agree that
the black telephone numbers were a good move !
Hope this has helped,
Cheers, Astrid.
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