I found the navigation menu hard to read. It also seemed like the link
copy was too small. 

I know you are planning on adding more information, but you might want
to think about who exactly your target market is. I was in underground
Atlanta years ago. I don't really remember much about it. What I think
is missing from your site is why I should go back. What makes it
special? How do I get there? Are there any special events? Can I get
something extra from your site that I can't get somewhere else - offers,
information, etc.? 

The layout is nice and clean - uncluttered. 

Lori 

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org] On
Behalf Of Gregory Norman
Sent: Thursday, August 22, 2002 8:25 AM
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
Subject: Please critique my site 



Hello all,

Please critique my first site www.iwasatunderground.com. I am doing this

site for the HTML II class here at HWG. It is also the beginning of what

I hope to develop into a site that visitors can get information about 
Underground Atlanta, specifically, and downtown Atlanta in general. I 
have started by listing the venues that are at Underground.

I will add pictures, menus and descriptions of the different venues as I

get at the complex as I get it. I will be doing most of the work, taking

pictures, writing, etc..., to avoid legal complications.

My plan is to have pictures, menus and descriptions appear in a pop-up 
window that is spawned when the visitor click on a link. One pop-up 
window will appear when the first informational link is clicked on. The 
information for subsequent links will appear the spawned window. I can 
see one problem with that-it could be difficult for viewers to make 
comparisons with on one spawned window available.

I would like any information/ideas that will help me in creating a site 
that is functional, accessible, informative and visually appealing. I 
would also like any ideas about any legals that I might consider.

Thanks,

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