RE: please critique

Precisely why I asked not to have YOU critique it, you obnoxious arrogant
self absorbed asshole.

You didn't respect my wishes, so why should I respect yours?

Take your friend Michael and head for the "home for the hopelessly
obnoxious" - you too deserve one another.


> -----Original Message-----
> From: killian jenkins [mailto:killian(at)ilikethis.cz]
> Sent: Sunday, January 10, 1999 9:18 PM
> To: netimken(at)erols.com
> Cc: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
> Subject: Re: please critique
>
>
>
> Too rigid and asphyxiating.  You need to break out of the blocky looking
> frames, square graphics and text composition.  The text is obnoxiously
> bold.  Most of us are not blind... turn off the brights.  The graphics
> quality is seriously hurting. What is that cityscape in the banner?  It
> looks like some lost futuristic moon civilization... a place nobody
> would want to live.  You need to look for some fresher images.  The
> title should not be 'homepage' I though this was a business...?  If so,
> give the page a proper name.  The money image behind the section heading
> is way too clich�.  I would ditch it.  The color scheme itself is very
> unaesthetically pleasing.  I would recommend a more neutral and
> professional scheme.  In fact... i would recommend browsing the web for
> several hours and looking at successful visually appealing corporate
> sites and making notes on what you like about them... why you think they
> are successful... then starting this one with a clean slate and head
> full of brilliant new ideas.
>
> there you go folks... i never said it was the worst site i ever saw ;-)
> though i am continually amazed at the number of people out there who
> don't realize how important their web presentation is to their business
> image and try to do it themselves.  These same people would never hang
> their own drywall if they had a house built... is web design that much
> different?
>
> --
> Best regards,
>
> Killian Jenkins
> Web designer
> ICQ#24867524
>
> i like this!
> for stellar Internet presence
> http://www.ilikethis.cz
>
> "Nelson E. Timken, Esq." wrote:
> >
> > Not being able to afford professional web hosting at the moment, I used
> > FrontPage to try to redo our web site in very simple fashion.
> >
> > http:www.jncapital.com
> >
> > Can someone (not Killian) take a look at make some constructive
> suggestions
> > on how someone with my beginner abilities can improve it.
> >
> > Thank you very much.
> >
> > Nelson
>

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