FW: site review

Rachel,

Perhaps you could use a table, or other formatting to force line breaks
where they would look their best.
All of your lines of text are centered, and I was left with several that
were fragments such as:

baby? What about adoption?

It just looks awkward. If the lines were set left, then this would not be
noticeable, but centered like you have them is probably better for your
message.

Br. Elias
-----Original Message-----
From:	owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org] On
Behalf Of Rachel
Sent:	Tuesday, July 06, 1999 21:47
To:	HWGcrit
Subject:	site review

JMJ
COuld several of you go to hte following site and let me know what you think
http://www.pregassist.org/
He that hideth his sins, shall not prosper: but he that shall confess , and
forsake them, shall obtain mercy. Proverbs 28:13.
Rachel Szilagyi
Wife/Mother
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http://ww2.netnitco.net/users/pray/
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