RE: Critique of Pencil Portrait Art Site

by "Marion Podolski" <marion(at)podolski.com>

Date:	Wed, 6 Oct 1999 15:12:17 -0700
To:	"Chris Opfell" <c.opfell(at)worldnet.att.net>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
In-Reply-To:	h2e8s0
	todo: View Thread, Original

Chris,

I liked your site a lot. Nice clean look, readable and very interesting.
Thumbnail sketches are good size, big enough to see but not too big. And I'm
going to follow up on some of those links when I have a minute!

BUT... why have everything on the same page? If you split it into 4 separate
pages (home page plus 3 others), then the initial load wouldn't be so
painfully long. As it is, your viewers have to wait for absolutely
everything to load before they can see/do anything at all!

Your artwork is good too!

Marion


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> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org]On
> Behalf Of Chris Opfell
> Sent: Wednesday, October 06, 1999 7:57 AM
> To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
> Subject: Critique of Pencil Portrait Art Site
>
>
> Hi.
>
> A couple of months ago, I submitted my Art Site for a critique. I got some
> great feedback....and have redesigned the site along the lines that were
> proposed.  So, I'm ready to have it critiqued again:
>
> http://www.ckomedia.com/chrisart.htm
>

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