RE: Draft of new page

by "lori" <emaillori(at)worldnet.att.net>

 Date:  Fri, 22 Nov 2002 09:22:20 -0600
 To:  <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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Looks good. I would suggest making the logos at the bottom smaller. They
are as big as the customer's logo. I assume they are just associations
they belong to. It is also just a little confusing to have the rule and
copy right above them. Makes it look like the copy and logos are
connected, which I don't think they are. Maybe you could put somewhere:
"Members of:".

I have another suggestion on the copy where it says "we don't believe in
one size fits all". I would add another word. "one size fits all" what -
service, policies, programs, etc. 

I would also add their hours and if each agent has different hours maybe
even list those. 

Lori Devoti

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