RE: Critique Request : Non-Profit AIDS Awareness and Prevention Website

First thing that popped to mind when I went to your site: Way too much going
on visually. I have to sit down and attempt to wade through all the stuff
you threw at me. Second, the red text links on the left nev bar are dificult
for me to read on my monitor: 17" set at 1152x864 32bit color. I admit that
I do not have a common config, but I do,:) Also, Win98, IE 4.01SP1
(obviously). The blue text in the center concerning "Preventing HIV
infection" and "Beyond Red Ribbons..." seem to be spaced out excessively.
There seems to be a blank column of white space "hanging" off to the right
side that does not seem to fit in. For the topic you are covering, I
personnally think the advertisements are in bad taste, but thats just me.
Thats about all i can think of. Email me privately if you need a more
detailed critique or have questions about my suggestions.
Take Care, Nicholas

> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org]On
> Behalf Of StThatCare(at)aol.com
> Sent: Sunday, January 10, 1999 11:46 PM
> To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
> Subject: Critique Request : Non-Profit AIDS Awareness and Prevention
> Website
>
>
> Dear Fellow HWGers:
>
> I am submitting my organization's website, Get Involved Online
> (http://www.get-involved.com) for your critique.  Please comment
> on anything
> and everything on as many parts of the site possible - including: Content,
> Design, Load Time, Missing Graphics, etc.  Also, in your critique please
> include the regular information about your connection,
> resolution, platform,
> etc.
>
> The Site is currently "closed" to the public, however, we hope to
> release it
> by Jan 25, 1999.
>
> To get to the site please go to:
> http://www.get-involved.com/index-new.shtml
>
> NOTE:  If you click on a link that will take you to the "MAIN
> MENU" or "MAIN
> PAGE" it will take you to http://www.get-involved.com/index.shtml
> - you will
> have to redirect your browser to
http://www.get-involved.com/index-new.shtml.

Thank you all in advance.

Sincerely,

Kevin M. Reed
Webmaster
Get Involved Online (http://www.get-involved.com/)

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