RE: Critique requested

by "Atticus Longwalker" <lngwlkr(at)netnitco.net>

Date:	Tue, 26 Jan 1999 22:31:20 -0600
To:	"HWG_Critique" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>, <chris(at)electricgrape.com>
In-Reply-To:	total
	todo: View Thread, Original

I see the splash page, but I see nothing that is enticing me inside.

Have to say, I dont like the use of color and text.  It is very difficult to
read.

Nice to see the mission statement but after two pages, I still dont know
what you do.

I am guessing you do artwork?  If I was looking for art design company, I
would not stop here because the only thing that was clear and precise was
the contact page.

Sorry Chris, I didnt like it.

Atticus Longwalker
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org]On
> Behalf Of Chris Luciano
> Sent: Tuesday, January 26, 1999 4:09 PM
> To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
> Subject: Critique requested
>
>
> Hello All,
>
> I would appreciate a critique of  www.electricgrape.com
>
> Thanks in advance,
>
> Chris Luciano
>
>
>
>

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