Re: Business site critique

David,

I find that your site fails to be professional-looking, which I feel it
should be.  In some places it even looks casual.  Three things:  1) the
background -- let's say it doesn't set the proper mood.   2) the graphics
are too flat and too PowerPoint-ish ... and you started with black and
white, so you should have stuck with the motif.  3) the fonts' default sizes
are too big.

This looks to be a site that should be dynamic and database-driven.  It
probably is, but I don't feel that.  So much so that the Active Channel
feature sits there rather incongruously.

Oliver.



-----Original Message-----
From: David Wilkerson <wilkman97(at)email.msn.com>
To: wdf(at)onelist.com <wdf(at)onelist.com>; HWG-Critique <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: Saturday, 27 June 1998 12:16 AM
Subject: Business site critique


>Well i asked for a business site critique and my dumb self forgot to add
the
>URL....i am sorry.
>here it is:
>http://www.sharp-network.com
>please be brutal but like i said if you do not like it tell me why not just
>that it sux ok?
>
>David  Wilkerson
>webmaster(at)beachboy.com
>wilkman97(at)email.msn.com
>http://www.beachboy.com
>Chat Central Host, Host Interviewer
>http://wwp.mirabilis.com/339944
>
>
>
>
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