RE: Final Critique
by "Demitrius" <iam(at)demitrius.com>
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Wed, 6 Jan 1999 18:09:02 -0800 |
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"Eric L. Hudson" <eric(at)hudnet.com>,
<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org> |
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Hi Eric,
Site critiqued: http://www.hudnet.com/
Viewed with a P133, 48kbps, 640x480 @24bit, MSIE 4.0
I didn't have much time, sorry, so I only looked at the index page.
Clean layout. I like the hudnet.com logo. Just a suggestion, but what about
animating that logo with some electrons racing their way along the circuit
board every 5 seconds?
I like the mouseOver navigation. Simple and clean.
IMO, the presentation would greatly benefit from some images. Perhaps
several photos faded into each other as a background behind the "Hudson's
Network Solution" banner up top? IMO, there's too much of a monochromatic
look going on. I'd break up that with some graphics of some kind.
Minor point, but your <hr width="200"> should be at least as wide as your
navigation links. Also, if it were me, I'd drop that second HR after the
navigation.
That's all I had time for.
Best,
Demitrius >I<
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