RE: please critique

Excellent criticisms Jack...I will make all the corrections you suggest.
Keep in mind, I just set it up, so that ALT tags and the home page Title
have not been done, same for metatags.

Thank you very much!!

Nelson

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jack Tumlin [mailto:jack(at)twsolinc.com]
> Sent: Sunday, January 10, 1999 9:23 PM
> To: netimken(at)erols.com; hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
> Subject: RE: please critique
>
>
> Nelson,
>
> Review your site : http://www.jncapital.com
> using IE 4.00, 800x600, 26.4k.
>
> Liked the way you are setting up your page background. The green
> versus the
> white makes for a nice contrast.
>
> I would consider using a different font for your text.
> Everything doesn't have
> to appear bold.
> The way you broke up your text in the "Financing" page by using
> horizontal and
> vertical lines made it  harder to read. I would consider getting
> rid of the
> vertical lines.
>
> On the "Principals" page you might want to consider listing the
> principle names
> and their titles and having a hyper link to their bios.  It would
> reduce the
> amount of scrolling.
>
> Also, consider how your audience will be viewing your site.  Will they be
> browsing at 640x480, 800x600 or higher. Design your page for the lowest
> resolution.
>
> You might want to consider putting something more descriptive
> then "button0.gif
> (1164 bytes)" in the alternative text of your navigation buttons.
>
> I like the money image.  Think you are off to a good start.
>
> Good luck! :)
>
> Jack Tumlin
> Tumbleweed Solutions, Inc.
> Jack(at)twsolinc.com
> <http://www.twsolinc.com/>http://www.twsolinc.com
>

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