RE: Critique personal site; Oz Factor

Duncan,

Dont like the whats new section.  If I were going there, I may want to know
what the latest and greatest addition to the site is, but I dont really care
what happened 2 and 3 months prior to the last update.

For the chat area, inform the visitor before hand that it is a java run chat
room.

make the midi an option to turn on, not an option to turn off.

On the Files page, you may want libnks to down further on thwe page, or a
visitor may never get to the bottom.

Personally I dislike links pages, but if you want one, the way you have done
it is the proper approach.  I actually like this page :-)

Tried to go to the awards page.  Got a screen asking me which version.  Huh?
the links to the two versions didnt go anywhere. (404 errors)

If you can edit your guest book.  Some entries in there dont need to be
there.

Atticus Longwalker
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-----Original Message-----
From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org]On
Behalf Of Duncan Paceman
Sent: Tuesday, January 26, 1999 5:16 PM
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
Subject: Critique personal site; Oz Factor


Hello,

Please take a look at my first attempt at a webpage.

The OZ FACTOR  http://www.pip.com.au/~paceman/
US Mirror of the OZ FACTOR  http://members.xoom.com/paceman/

A very brief history; I first built the page about 18 months ago, but
unfortunately it has not been updated for about 8 months for various
unavoidable reasons. I am now in the position where I will be able to
maintain a website on an ongoing basis. I wish to either give the site a
major overhaul or a complete redesign, any and all comments welcome.

Thanks in advance

Duncan Pacey

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