Re: Need a critique of new business site

Hi Linda
MSIE 5.0  800X600 Todays Connection 33k 14" Monitor
On the 14" monitor it just makes it
Why is your domain name and your company name different ???
On your home page you have a link to jireh-scope page which is the same page
if you are going to use this as a link to your home page why not carry it on
all pages "re: example page"   I agree it is not very customer friendly. You
should have links on all pages and be consistent.
On your home page the word weather is spelt correct but it is the wrong
meaning.
I feel more like I came to a home page not a commercial site.
"nice graphics"
good luck
robert1
www.galaxy2k.com



----- Original Message -----
From: Linda Shumaker <lshum(at)localline.com>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Tuesday, August 22, 2000 7:56 AM
Subject: Need a critique of new business site


>
> I am a brand new business based in Covington, Indiana. I have asked for
> some business counseling from In Score. They wrote the following
> suggestion: "As far as the Internet is concerned, we believe that your web
> site could be improved to be more "customer-friendly". "
> I have been lurking on this list for several weeks and you seem to be
> willing to give some very constructive criticism. So, please critique the
> following site: www.htmldesigns.net .
>
> Linda Shumaker
> Jireh-Scope Enterprises
>
>

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