I have to agree with Killian.  You do really nice work.  I would add one
small suggestion - the text on some of the buttons is so small I have to
lean forward and strain to see it (800x600, 24bit true color).  That's true
for some other text as well.  The mouseovers are fast and work like a charm!

skf

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org] On
Behalf Of killian jenkins
Sent: Wednesday, January 27, 1999 2:26 PM
To: Collin Lim
Cc: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
Subject: Re: Russian Travel Agency Site


Well... from the two projects i have seen so far you are the best
designer on this list who contributes on a regular basis.  as far as
this one goes... i don't mind the middle window holding all the content
as many invariably will, but what i would like to see is something
happen in the black... even if it is significant ghosted backgrounds.
it is too stark and unfinished looked at the moment.  nice work overall.

--
Best regards,

Killian Jenkins
Web designer


i like this!
for stellar Internet presence
http://www.ilikethis.cz

Collin Lim wrote:
>
> I would like to request a critique on a travel agency site.  Please
> excuse the heavy use of nested frames on a commercial site (requested by
> the client).  A few of the pages are still under construction.  I would
> like comments on the design, navigation, and functionality; especially
> how the frame effect looks on various browsers.  I'm concern that the
> frames may get all bent out of shape at different browser settings.
> Thanks in advance.
>
> http://www.ynn.com/collinl/usual/index.html
>
> -Collin
> collinlim(at)hotmail.com
>
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