re: non-profit women's site

by "Blue" <blue(at)bluesarthouse.com>

 Date:  Mon, 12 Apr 1999 10:49:11 -0500
 To:  "hwg critique list" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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critique of http://members.xoom.com/drouinr/options/options.htm

Hi Rachel:
Well there's not too much there to critique yet but it's a good start.  The
main graphic was a little bit slow with a 56K modem but I see it's only 11K
so that shouldn't be a problem.  Your mouseover buttons are working nicely.

If you're going for "understated feminine" IMHO I think you might want to be
more subtle.  I think as it is it is extremely feminine and not really
understated at all with the lace border, rose and pretty script in the logo.
I'm rather a feminist type and get a bit turned off when things are too
lacey, foofoo, pretty.  But remember that's just my opinion and your main
concern is to please your customer.

Overall, nice beginning.
HTH
Blue



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