Re: Critique of The Worldhouse.

Hi, I've checked out your site and these are my comments:  (note I'm not a
professional designer).  I like the design but the navigation is difficult.
Instead of having your bar with next, prev, etc. perhaps those items could
be links to the actual pages.   The displaying of the link bar twice along
with the copyright/legal stuff on every page becomes annoying after the
first few times because there is no new information plus it takes up
valuable web space.  But overall I do like the look and feel of the site.

Good Luck!

Renie


-----Original Message-----
From: SDJThorin <sdjthorin(at)geocities.com>
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: Thursday, October 14, 1999 5:09 PM
Subject: Critique of The Worldhouse.


>Good Afternoon List,
>
>I've got most of the work done on my first business site &
>would like to get a critique of it before I show it to my
>client on Sat. Oct. 16th.
>
>They know that not all of the content is there, since they
>haven't given it to me yet *g*.
>
>So if you could, I'd like an in-depth critique of the site.
>
>Link : http://216.65.15.67/Worldhouse/
>
>NB : a few of the TOC Bar Buttons don't have their content
>     yet & have been disabled.
>
>Thanks, in advance,
>
> SDJThorin.
>
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