critique from Michael A.

by "Wendelika Cline" <ejwcline(at)mail.coos.or.us>

 Date:  Fri, 3 Jul 1998 11:14:34 -0700
 To:  "hwg critique list" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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Dear Michael,
    Thank you for the very helpful critique.  I was so caught up in =
learning how to do imagemaps that I overlooked a bunch of those design =
issues.  I am trying to clean up the "coloured thingy" so that the file =
size is more acceptable and the text easier to read.  It looks great in =
Corel Draw, but gets really muddy when I export it.
    BTW, could you please tell me which browser you are viewing with?  =
The "Burst!" graphic is supposed to be to the left of each heading.
You wrote:
<3. The little round graphic after the headings pushes the explanation
<down so far that it is closer to the next heading than to the one to
<which it refers
    This puzzles me.
Also, thanks for the list of URLs.  I will be checking them out soon.  =
Perhaps today, while the little ones are napping.
    Please feel free to e-mail me for homeschooling info.  I don't =
believe I got your e-mail address with your response.

Shalom,
Wende

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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Dear Michael,</FONT></DIV>
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could you please tell me which browser you are viewing with?&nbsp; The=20
&quot;Burst!&quot; graphic is supposed to be to the left of each=20
heading.</FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>You wrote:</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>&lt;3. The little round graphic =
after the=20
headings pushes the explanation<BR>&lt;down so far that it is closer to =
the next=20
heading than to the one to<BR>&lt;which it refers</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <FONT =
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puzzles me.</FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Also, thanks for the list of =
URLs.&nbsp; I will=20
be checking them out soon.&nbsp; Perhaps today, while the little ones =
are=20
napping.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <FONT =
color=3D#000000>Please=20
feel free to e-mail me for homeschooling info.&nbsp; I don't believe I =
got your=20
e-mail address with your response.</FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Shalom,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Wende</FONT></DIV>
<DIV>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>EJW Cline<BR>Internet =
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