RE: Critique Request

by "lori" <emaillori(at)worldnet.att.net>

 Date:  Tue, 10 Sep 2002 14:23:05 -0500
 To:  <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
 In-Reply-To:  uc
  todo: View Thread, Original

I really like the layout. 

A few suggestions. First I didn't even realize the photos were links
until I read Carol's note. (I may just be having a dense moment.) But
since you have a link to the same page in print too, that's not a
problem just a comment. 

I do think you could distinguish your navigation area a little. On first
glance I thought it was just copy. I didn't realize they were links
until I put my mouse over the words. (maybe bullets or more
line-height?)

Is there supposed to be a link from the photo gallery box? It says to
visit it, but I don't see a way to reach it.

Then I always have to mention the sales side (sorry it is an obsession
of mine). :-) I know you don't have all your copy on the pages, but
where are you going to put ticket info.? It seems like that might
warrant it's own page - especially if you offer season tickets and can
buy them online. Even if you don't/can't I still think people might be
checking the web site with their major intent being finding out about
tickets - how much they cost, when and how they can get them. 

Looks great!

Lori

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