Re: Critique of site

by grandane(at)cnova.net

 Date:  Fri, 10 Dec 1999 15:13:21 -0400
 To:  <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
 Cc:  <jnwhittley(at)fuse.net>
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http://www.brewerdesign.com

Hello Nancy,

I have been to your site in the past (g) and this is what I thought just now
after revisiting:

Primarily, the design, choice of color, and layout does not follow through.
Gives the impression of being two separate web-sites!

Layout of main page, although neat and not unattractive deals almost
exclusively with flag and pertinent info. The _one_ nav link to the garden
tools, appears almost non existent as opposed to the very
many links re flags.

First of all, I would decide whether I wanted two separate web sites, the
one dealing with flags and the other with garden accessories.

If you decide to go with just one site, would suggest that _all_ pages
are the same color and layout with same color text, with the same logo at
the top instead of two different main headers (on the page with "Concrete in
a different class,,,,, there appears to be no logo at the top).

Main page should try and deal with introduction to both flags and gardens,
keeping info on both at equal amounts,  putting one main nav link for flags
and the same for the garden info. which will lead viewers to their choice of
selection.

Just my thoughts.....

28.8.
800x600
NC4.7

Pat Greenfield

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