Re: Okay, be brutal!
by "Wong Chin Fong" <zhenfang(at)geocities.com>
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Sat, 28 Feb 1998 16:45:33 +0800 |
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"Emma" <emma(at)activenet-marketing.co.uk> |
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The sites have a nice background. The colour is light ad goes well with =
the font colour. However it is too un-aggressive especially for a =
commercial site that is trying to gain attention and make an impact. =
You might thus want to use slightly louder colours.=20
The icons are rather plain and though it is pleasant to the eye, it does =
not grab the reader sufficiently to make him/her treat the site =
seriously. The whole page looks really static, like a piece of artwork =
waiting desperately to be noticed though it may never be.
The fonts are okay though the use of more catchy titles, phrases and =
different fonts for the headings might make a better delivery.
Overall the pages looks a tit too passive to be attractive and is just =
another painting on the wall.
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