RE: Please Critique: http://www.pisolutions.com
by "lori" <emaillori(at)worldnet.att.net>
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The site is very professional looking. I like a little more information
up front on the home page, but I know a lot of people like just the
"doorway" thing. The only suggestion I would have is maybe a little more
meat in the information so to speak. If I were a business person looking
to get an agency to market my business I would want more examples or
history on the advertising stuff. Maybe a list of clients, ad examples,
testimonials or a link to some photography examples. I also would want
to know where you are located. At least for the broadcast work it seems
you would only be able to provide that service locally. Plus if you
mention the city in your copy it should help your site pop up in
searches when people are looking for a designer in your area.
Looks good!
Lori Devoti
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