I viewed the petprovisions site on MSIE 4.0 800X600 32bit
I have 2 comments clipart does not belong on a commercial site
and the picture of the cat  on the first page needs work looks like a scan
from a magazine picture
not very professional looking
robert1
-----Original Message-----
From: Jeffrey Newman <newman(at)bcinternet.net>
To: Web Site Critique <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Date: Wednesday, October 13, 1999 3:17 PM
Subject: New Site


>I've just launched this site
> http://petprovisions.hypermart.net/
>and would appreciate any comments.
>
>You would be welcome to visit my personal site too.
>Both URLs are below
>
>--
>
>                       *******************************
>Jeffrey Newman
>
>Pet Provisions:  http://petprovisions.hypermart.net/  - Top quality pet
food
>delivered to your door
>
>Personal Web Site:  http://www2.bcinternet.net/~newman/Jeffrey.htm   Drop
in some
>time.
>
>ICQ: 9879310
>
>When you're swimmin' in the creek
>      And an eel bites your cheek
>      That's a moray!
>      -- Fabulous Furry Freak Brothers
>
>

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