Re: Please have a look...
by "Matt Avitable" <mavitabl(at)richmond.edu>
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OK, the first thing you should definitely do is get rid of that animated =
woman. She seems to clash with the Credo of the web page. Make the main =
navigation page the splash page. I think the woman is quite unnecessary =
(excuse my spelling). Otherwise, navigation is fine, though I do have =
to scroll alot to see main features ot your page. Scrolling is ok for =
large amounts of info in paragraphs, but usually not for very important =
page features.
Maybe try squishing the page =
http://www.safdieco.com/safpage/safhome.html a little more to the top. =
I was looking at it full screen on a 800x600, and i had to scroll just a =
bit. Also, why is the questionaire so large? =20
Overall, It looks good, and is easily navigable. Quick loading. =
Congrats!
Matt Avitable
-----Original Message-----
From: MIchael Lessard <mykonmyk(at)odyssee.net>
To: hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Date: Wednesday, August 05, 1998 10:15 AM
Subject: Please have a look...
Hello, friends.=20
When you've got a sec, please have a look at my=20
small commercial site.=20
http://www.SafdieCo.com=20
All constructive comments are much appreciated.=20
Cheers,=20
Michael=20
Michael Lessard=20
Design for the Web=20
mykonmyk(at)odyssee.net=20
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<P><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>OK, the first thing you should =
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get rid of that animated woman. She seems to clash with the Credo of the =
web=20
page. Make the main navigation page the splash page. I think the =
woman is=20
quite unnecessary (excuse my spelling). Otherwise, navigation is =
fine,=20
though I do have to scroll alot to see main features ot your page. =
Scrolling is ok for large amounts of info in paragraphs, but usually not =
for=20
very important page features.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT><FONT size=3D2>Maybe try =
squishing the page=20
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href=3D"http://www.safdieco.com/safpage/safhome.html">http://www.safdieco=
.com/safpage/safhome.html</A> =20
a little more to the top. I was looking at it full screen on a =
800x600,=20
and i had to scroll just a bit. Also, why is the questionaire so=20
large? </FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=3D2>Overall, It looks good, and is easily navigable. =
Quick=20
loading. Congrats!</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=3D2>Matt Avitable</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><B>-----Original =
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</B>MIchael Lessard <<A=20
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o: </B><A=20
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t;<BR><B>Date:=20
</B>Wednesday, August 05, 1998 10:15 AM<BR><B>Subject: </B>Please have a =
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5px"></FONT>Hello,=20
friends. <BR>When you've got a sec, please have a look at my =
<BR>small=20
commercial site.=20
<P><A href=3D"http://www.SafdieCo.com">http://www.SafdieCo.com</A>=20
<P>All constructive comments are much appreciated.=20
<P>Cheers,=20
<P>Michael=20
<P><FONT size=3D-2>Michael Lessard</FONT> <BR><FONT size=3D-2>Design =
for the=20
Web</FONT> <BR><FONT size=3D-2>mykonmyk(at)odyssee.net</FONT>=20
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