>From a visual point of view, I think your site could use a little more
white space - more margin on the sides and more variation in font size.
I think it is all a little too big. The box on the left is right on the
left margin of the window.  I can barely see the red line on that side. 

>From a navigation/usability point of view I would walk through how
people are going to use the site. If I were interested in the product I
would want more of a one stop option - when you view the details of the
software you should have the price and ordering info available on the
same page or at least a link to the specific spot where this information
is stored. I am also big on making it simple stupid for people to order.
I would put a link to the contact form or however you want people to buy
the product on that page. The more they have to hunt around to lay out
the cash the more likely you are to lose the sale. 

As always, just one person's opinion. :)

Lori

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