Re: Critique http://rielle.simplenet.com/test/

>Date: Tuesday, April 28, 1998 9:33 AM
>Subject: Critique http://rielle.simplenet.com/test/

>Please critique on layout, graphic design, viewability on different
>resolutions, usability, loading time, etc. If anyone has time to make
>any suggestions as far as the text goes, that would be helpful.
>The site is at: http://rielle.simplenet.com/test/
>Thanks!
>Gabi

Hello Gabi,

    Just a few tiny things I noticed, noting really big. But 1st must say IN
MY on thought the Black BG fits....

    If it where I and if Design is really what your into then I would either
put some examples on so prospects could few more than your page or create
some if you do not have any yet. Maybe add a jump for "Design Examples" or
something.

    Looked at it with IE4.1 and NS 3.1, both loaded well both looked fine
except IE 4.1. The ABOUT paragraph has numerous spaces between the words, in
NS they are not there, unsure as to the why's....

    Been told that a Copyright w/o the correct symbol means nothing, unsure
if this is correct.

    No Doc type...

    Alt tags missing but they are your mouseovers..

    You us Endress Design a lot, I think that all would know the name as
they are at your site, what about We instead?

    Last I would on the copyright statement or somewhere, put your E-Mail in
full and your URL in full, the mailto;'s work on most but not all and for
some they may print your page it leaves the URL out if not bookmarked (as
well as e-mail)..

Other than those little items all is fine, all looks good here, all loads
fast. Time for some fine tuning. Oh and do not forget some good strong Meta
tags. Remember on metas correct spelling is NOT always good. Example know a
lot that would put htm for html as in < html help> in the meta or webpage
instead of web page. Big stories on misspelling's on meta's to be found.

Have a good one......

Ben

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