Re: Critique Please

Hi Woody,
As for the graphic being off on the main page, the image is corrupt. I tried
to download it and it won't show up. The other 3 are fine. The placement on
your table looks perfect. (Accept for the missing TITLE Tag and No Alt Tags)

It loaded reasonably fast on my DSL connection.
Gallery and subsequent pages, No home link
Under Gallery, The first image of you fits well in the area, subsequent
images are too large and some unfocused. I'd make them all the same size.
Same with Aquarium pics.

Color scheme is pleasing. I like the card setup as nav links.
Overall, Nice job! Just needs a little clean up.

Hope this helps and good luck!
Jayne
Skyline Design
http://www.skyline-design.com

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Sent: Tuesday, January 14, 2003 7:07 AM
Subject: Critique Please


> Hello All My Critique-ing Fellows...
>
> Okay.. FINALLY I have a website (personal of course) that I feel
comfortable
> enough with to post here.  Just remember it IS a personal website, that is
> mainly for fun, etc.  Please keep that in mind when you critique it.  It
has
> a LONNNNGGG way to go still.. but its further along than any other design
> I have done... (cant tell you how many times Ive deleted a design and
> started
> completely over.  ALot of content still needs to be added too.  YES.. I
know
> the opening page graphic is messed up.. have NO idea why though.. but Im
> working on it.  Yes I know I need more in my Gallery.  Basically I just
want
> opinions on the overall design.  Maybe suggestions on content that maybe
> be missing that needs to be there, etc.  No, it doesnt have any fancy
flash
> or
> anything like that.  Im not that talented yet.  But, at the same time Im
not
> sure its "necessary"..  i get in that arguement all the time with fellow
> designers about what is necessary..
>
> The site is at  www.jigger.us    (Jigger is my dog by the way.. hehe)
>
> Thanks for the critique!!
>
> Woody
>
>

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