Re: Desperat
by "Tracey" <tabits(at)geocities.com>
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"Scott Desveaux" <sdesveaux(at)usa.net>,
"Hwg Critique" <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org> |
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Hi Scott,
I viewed with w95, 800x600res, mills of colours, netscape 4.08
Here are my thoughts:
The first thing I noticed was a border around the enter graphic on the =
first page. That can easily be solved by a border=3D"0" inside your =
<img> tag. Your logo.gif is a too large for a web page - both in =
physical size and in K size, you'll need to reduce it.
On the main page - your navigation wording is slightly cut off on the =
right - a solution would be to make the arrows smaller or rework it a =
bit. Your 'scott online' background on my resolution caused me to only =
see half the wording. not a bad effect if this is what you were going =
for, however on a smaller res 640x480 you wouldn't see it at all. =20
Your fonts didn't seem consistent to me. Sometimes you used courier new =
and other times, arial. And the sizes were also not consistent, they =
were far too large on your 'about me' section.
I think this page shows promise but needs some work before it will 'blow =
your friends' (although I haven't really seen there pages so how do I =
know!). =20
For a brilliant page you've got to cater for all resolutions and keep =
consistent throughout. I'm sure you'll get there in the end
cheers
tracey
work
www.zivo.com
play
www.users.fl.net.au/~paq/webdesign/
-----Original Message-----
From: Scott Desveaux <sdesveaux(at)usa.net>
To: Hwg Critique <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Date: Sunday, 31 January 1999 16:57
Subject: Desperat
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Hello my faithful list. Here is the task I feel I must bestow upon =
you:
I am a 13 year old programmer (;-) who just started learning HTML 3 =
months ago, I haven't released any other sites, but I have many projects =
on the go.
Before I fling this site into the world that is the internet, I =
request severe Critiqeing (sp),
please help me out,
and be sure to GIVE any comments that you feel are needed, I don't =
care, I thrive on criticizm.
I really, really, really hope that you all can help me out, because =
I want this to blow my friends (who think the're better than me) away.
http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline
Thanks in advance,
and I know that you'll come through.
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~scott
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P.S. I repeat, I thrive on Criticizm, and I want the truth, I can =
handle the truth!
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Scott Desveaux (A Proud Student of Joe Barta)
sdesveaux(at)usa.net
http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline (New Project, Much More =
to come)
Member of: HTML Writers Guild, International WebMasters Association, =
Vice-Prez of =A7mirk Inc.
Icq: 16217003
Aol Im: skott13
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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Hi Scott,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>I viewed with w95, 800x600res, mills of colours, =
netscape=20
4.08</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Here are my thoughts:</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>The first thing I noticed was a border around the =
enter=20
graphic on the first page. That can easily be solved by a=20
border=3D"0" inside your <img> tag. Your logo.gif =
is a too=20
large for a web page - both in physical size and in K size, you'll need =
to=20
reduce it.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>On the main page - your navigation wording is =
slightly cut off=20
on the right - a solution would be to make the arrows smaller or rework =
it a=20
bit. Your 'scott online' background on my resolution caused me to =
only see=20
half the wording. not a bad effect if this is what you were going =
for,=20
however on a smaller res 640x480 you wouldn't see it at all. =
</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Your fonts didn't seem consistent to me. =
Sometimes you=20
used courier new and other times, arial. And the sizes were also =
not=20
consistent, they were far too large on your 'about me' =
section.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>I think this page shows promise but needs some work =
before it=20
will 'blow your friends' (although I haven't really seen there pages so =
how do I=20
know!). </FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>For a brilliant page you've got to cater for all =
resolutions=20
and keep consistent throughout. I'm sure you'll get there in the=20
end</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>cheers</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>tracey</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>work</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2><A =
href=3D"http://www.zivo.com">www.zivo.com</A></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>play</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT><FONT size=3D2><A=20
href=3D"http://www.users.fl.net.au/~paq/webdesign/">www.users.fl.net.au/~=
paq/webdesign/</A></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><B>-----Original =
Message-----</B><BR><B>From:=20
</B>Scott Desveaux <<A=20
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href=3D"mailto:sdesveaux(at)usa.net">sdesveaux(at)usa.net</A>><BR><B>To: =
</B>Hwg=20
Critique <<A=20
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href=3D"mailto:hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org">hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org</A>&g=
t;<BR><B>Date:=20
</B>Sunday, 31 January 1999 16:57<BR><B>Subject:=20
</B>Desperat<BR><BR></DIV></FONT>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>Hello my faithful list. Here is the =
task I feel=20
I must bestow upon you:</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>I am a 13 year old programmer (;-) =
who just=20
started learning HTML 3 months ago, I haven't released any other =
sites, but=20
I have many projects on the go.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>Before I fling this site into the =
world that is=20
the internet, I request severe Critiqeing (sp),</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>please help me out,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>and be sure to GIVE any comments =
that you feel=20
are needed, I don't care, I thrive on criticizm.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>I really, really, really hope that =
you all can=20
help me out, because I want this to blow my friends (who think =
the're better=20
than me) away.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><A=20
=
href=3D"http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline">http://home.talkcity=
.com/WallSt/scottonline</A></FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>Thanks in advance,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>and I know that you'll come=20
through.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>~scott</FONT></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>P.S. I repeat, I thrive on =
Criticizm, and I=20
want the truth, I can handle the truth!</FONT></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial=20
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Desveaux (A Proud Student of Joe Barta)<BR><A=20
href=3D"mailto:sdesveaux(at)usa.net">sdesveaux(at)usa.net</A><BR><A=20
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href=3D"http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline">http://home.talkcity=
.com/WallSt/scottonline</A>=20
(New Project, Much More to come)<BR>Member of: HTML Writers Guild,=20
International WebMasters Association, Vice-Prez of §mirk =
Inc.<BR>Icq:=20
16217003<BR>Aol Im:=20
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