Hi Richard,
Nice site - Good consistent navigation. Two minor quibbles:
The pictures on the opening page could be a little crisper and more
colorful - with the all green color theme, they don't really "pop" they way
they could. Consider using the flax image and the begonia leaves images
alternating with the green images.
This top text has me confused:
Prickly Pair is going to change the way that Auckland's Florists buy their
greenery: high quality, freshly cut greenery delivered three days a week to
your door. "That isn't very different" you say, well what about ...

Well, where do I go to learn why it is different?  I was kind of expecting a
read more link. Which would be a perfect place for you to give the buyer a
little background info about Prickly Pair.

Overall, nice site.

Hope this helps -
Jayne
Skyline Design

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Richard Lake" <relake(at)akc.quik.co.nz>
To: <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Sent: Thursday, July 01, 2004 11:16 PM
Subject: Please critique www.pricklypair.co.nz


> I've been setting up a new site, it's not finished in that there's a
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> I'd love some feedback if you've got the time.
> Thanks in advance
> Richard
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