Re: Critique:Lithium Design
by "Jim and Roxi" <jbax(at)olypen.com>
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I was just looking at your LITHIUM DESIGN site .. and it really is =
beautiful .. I feel you've done a great job with the colors and the =
actual layout ...
The only thing is .. I found quite a few typographical errors on it ..=20
On the Silhouettes in Dream ... you've used "it's" .. when in fact .. if =
you read it without the contraction .. it is .. it's not correct (this =
is one of the most common typos there is). The word address is also =
misspelled down near the bottom.
I love the thumbnails on the Portfolio page .. perhaps having them just =
a little larger (clearer) would be something to consider .. but overall =
.. I feel it's a great site!
Good job!
Roxi
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colors and the actual layout ...</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DTahoma>The only thing is .. I found =
quite a few=20
typographical errors on it .. </FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DTahoma>On the Silhouettes in Dream ... =
you've used=20
"it's" .. when in fact .. if you read it without the =
contraction .. it=20
is .. it's not correct (this is one of the most common typos there =
is). =20
The word address is also misspelled down near the bottom.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DTahoma></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DTahoma>I love the thumbnails on the Portfolio page .. =
perhaps=20
having them just a little larger (clearer) would be something to =
consider .. but=20
overall .. I feel it's a great site!</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DTahoma></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DTahoma>Good job!</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=3DTahoma>Roxi</FONT></DIV>
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