Re: Site check, please..

by "Nancy Whittley" <jnwhittley(at)fuse.net>

Date:	Thu, 3 Aug 2000 17:59:42 -0400
To:	"Max Bloom" <max(at)integratedstreaming.com>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
References:	gtei
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Dear Max,

Win 98 SE
17" Monitor
800 x 600
ADS Connection
Netscape Communicator 4.6

Ok nice flash intro...then to the home page.  Sort of bland...
but that is a preference issue.

You have a page about what you do.. with links to examples..
Nice examples I watched each one.  Nicely done.
Your home.htm page has a JavaScript error.   I opened the page in MSIE 5.5
and it also said there was an error in the page.  But I didn't get details
so
I can't help you there.

My personal opinion of the site is that it is lacking...  you have great
examples
of your work, but the site is just very bland and doesn't convince me that I
need your services.  You offer who you are, what you do and where you are..
but that doesn't convince me of "Why" I need your services.  How could it
benefit
my site?  And how much?  I am sort of funny about things, I want to find
some
sort of reference to a price on a site or I won't contact them about
services
even if I really want them.  Even a ball park figure would help.

Overall I just don't think you site sells your product.

These are my opinions!

Hope this is a bit helpful.

Nancy


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