Hello....

Well, the layout certainly displays better this time. The white text box is
centrally displayed, as I suspect it is supposed to. The color scheme is
still very hard on my eyes. I would suggest that you put a little more
content into your site, as far as a portfolio of past work done, and so on.
I also noted that on each page, the spacing between the lines of the first
paragraph is wider than on the second paragraph.

Keep up the good work. It's getting there.

Dusty

----- Original Message -----
From: "Burt Maass" <burtthemime(at)yahoo.com>
To: "hwg-critique" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Tuesday, October 22, 2002 4:32 AM
Subject: please critique dHTML site (round 2)


> I think I've shaken most of the bugs out. Can we try again?
>
>  -b
>
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Burt Maass" <burtthemime(at)yahoo.com>
> > To: "hwg-critique" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
> > Sent: Monday, October 21, 2002 7:26 PM
> > Subject: please critique dHTML site
> >
> >
> > > Hi, I'd love to get some feedback on:
> > >
> > > http://harmco.home.netcom.com/
> > >
> > > Bugs? Comments? Tips?
>
>
>
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