Re: First Business Site

by "Tracey" <tabits(at)geocities.com>

 Date:  Wed, 2 Dec 1998 10:54:34 +1100
 To:  "Restless & Wild" <RestlessAndWild(at)webtv.net>,
<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
  todo: View Thread, Original
Congrats on your first business site - getting your first 'client' is always
the hardest.

Anyway I viewed with 800x600, Netscape 4.07, W95, 15" monitor

Suggestions:

I first noticed that your buttons on the left side were hard to read.  The
text isn't that clear on them so you may want to tweak them a bit more.
They also have borders around them which I personally don't like.  This can
be fixed with a little border="0" statement in your img tag.

When you go to your separate pages you need to always return to the home
page to choose another section.  It would be a good idea to put links to all
the sections on all the pages.  You don't need to place the buttons there
again if you don't want.  Text links would be fine.

I prefer not being able to 'see' tables.  So the bottom one looks better
without colouring and borders.

Your bullets are fine.  You may want to make a new 'heading' as a plain text
heading in my opinion doesn't look crisp and polished.  I usually create one
in a paint program with a transparent background so I can get the absolute
font I want!

Anyway good start, and good luck

tracey




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