RE: Site critique please
by "Steve Devoti" <steve.devoti(at)worldnet.att.net>
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Wed, 28 Aug 2002 16:35:47 -0500 |
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Very nice use of mouseovers.
I would rearrange things somewhat on the home page. You have a lot of
unnecessary white space to the right of the picture. I come from an
advertising background so I know the benefits of white space, but it
needs balance. I would try moving the picture up and then maybe the
header and navigation bars to the right of it. That would however mess
up your continuity with the other pages. You could also make the image
more horizontal so if fills the space a little more. Play around with
it.
I saw one typo on the motorcycle page - "Alaska has several highways
that connec the major urban areas".
I liked the colors. They were different on each page, but still had the
same feel giving you continuity.
Also, on any links that go to other sites I would open a new window
rather than risking that the viewer looses your site in his/her interest
in the new site.
Nice job!
Lori
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