Re: Looking for input

I'm afraid I have to agree with Carol. Two things that I would do to improve
this page would be to change the color scheme -- the green and black just
strikes me as being very hard on the eyes and unfriendly, and change or get
rid of the two photo collages. They are out of focus and I'm not sure what
purpose they serve. All in all, I did not view your site as very inviting.

Sorry,
Dusty

----- Original Message -----
From: "Carol Parent" <cbwd(at)means.net>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Thursday, September 05, 2002 6:13 AM
Subject: RE: Looking for input


> Morning Scott,
>
> Green and black - too dark.  Looks dreary.
> I am not sure the meaning of the angel(?).
> The photos running down the side look out-of-focus rather than 'artistic.'
> Bottom photo should line up with left-side green bar.
> Again, the photo just looks out-of-focus. Doesn't add to the site at all.
>
> Summary-
> Rethink your site.
> There really isn't anything on the homepage that makes anyone want to go
any
> further.
> It gives one a very depressing feeling.
>
> The layout could be interesting if you used different colors.
> And unless the little angel(?) guy has some sort of special meaning to
you,
> I would rethink using him.
>
> All the above is MY OPINION.  Someone else could feel completely
different.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Carol Parent
> info(at)cbwdi.net
> http://www.cbwdi.net
>
> I finally got it all together...
> I just wish I could remember where I set it down.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org]On
> Behalf Of Scott Smith
> Sent: Thursday, September 05, 2002 2:08 AM
> To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
> Subject: Looking for input
>
>
>
> Here is a first stab, coming soon type page. Please provide me whatever
> feedback you have time to contribute. If nothing else, I consider this a
> stake in the ground . This is a commercial page for my coming design /
> consulting presence. http://www.wahikan.com/
>
> Many thanks,
>
> Scott Smith
> mailto:scott(at)wahikan.com
> Wahikan iServices
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