I didn't go back and re-read all of the copy - sorry :( 

My main comment is that you need to be pushier about asking for the
sale. You put a whole bunch of information out there, but don't have
anywhere for "Get your Custom Solution Now" or "Ask for a Quote" or
however you want to approach it. I think you need to give your potential
customers a little push. 

I also saw nothing on pricing. I realize you may not want to do the this
$$ gets you this site/application, but I think it at least needs an
explanation on your pricing policy - per hour, per page, etc. 

Wasn't there copy on your home page before? I think it needs a short
intro. rather than just being a doorway to the rest of your site.

Now I will really go out on a limb and say I don't think the flag
graphic adds a lot to the home page - for your product. I also am not
wild about the black bar graphics. It seems heavy (on the home page) in
comparison to all the white space and the logo. Maybe if you add copy to
the home page the bars won't seem so heavy or maybe you could shorten
them (in height). 

As always this is just my opinion. 

Good luck.

Lori 

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