Re: New member needs a hand

>This site is Ham radio related and is hobby and service site.
>here is the URL  http://www.california.com/~kwise
>Thanks in advance for all your help..
>73..Ken...KE6QNK

Hello Ken,

        Let me 1st say the concept behind the page is good, as a ex-fellow
Ham Operator I liked the idea of the page.

        But, always one of them hate that, you do have some problems or
concerns in the layout and the code. Lets go with the layout for starters.

        You have done a great job in gathering Information on the Site
topic, the only concern I would have here is you put it all on 1 page. The
Index Page is far to big and far to full. Do not mis-understand, I like all
the info it just make it load way to slow and look way to busy. If you where
to break it up a little, say like a page for ICQ, a About you Page, maybe a
Logo Page etc..  In short you just need to break it down a little and all
will be Much Better... Another PERSONAL thought would be to change the
background, though its nice what about making your entrance pic a little
smaller and putting it atop the whole page with maybe a white or off white
background instead of your call sign be the title... Just a thought.

        Now the code,
                You need to fill some or all of the Alt tags in.
                You have Size in a Table mark-up, not good
                I found 2 open tags for <TR> and <TD> cannot remember lines
                Numerous cases of spaces after > throughout
                Some instances of "your quotes"without a following space

    In short just some small tweaks needed..

Ben

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