Re: Is this too over the top?
by "Karin Christensen" <karin(at)imagecyte.com>
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I agree with what Tenley said. I was drawn to what looked like specks or
imperfections that on closer inspection are the logos on the ambulance.
Maybe have the gray image less transparent.
Not related to the photo, but I think more white area at the left margin
would help. The text goes right up to edge of the browser window as it is.
Karin
> Hi Carol,
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> I ** almost** like the graphic, but the places where the vehicle and
> man's hand overlap are cluttered and draw my attention to figuring out
> whether the truck decals and lights are rings on his fingers or not.
> --
> Best regards,
>
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