Re: Critique Request

Hi Martin,

I agree with Ann about background. In addition, your color for visited links
is much too light, I think you might use a darker gray.

Navigation bars: IMHO, it was better to read if you changed its colors in
one of these ways:
1) color of font much brighter, letters bold, for good contrast (my
preference)
2) color of background: same color as the brighter color of font (tolerable)
3) letters bold (at least!)
I like the unusual idea to put the link to homepage to the MIDDLE of the
navigation bar... the homepage IS the center of a website :-) Many people,
used to top left corner, might be confused first, though...

Portfolio: screenshot thumbnail for "Chickenscratch" is missing.

Overall, one of those clear, bright sites that I like :-)

IE 5.0, ISDN (64k), WIN 98, PII 350, 256 MB
21", 32-bit colors, 1280x1024
Cookies: off
Javascript: on
ActiveX etc.: by demand

Gerhard Sch�ning
gerhard(at)schoening-online.com

Web Design for Universal Accessibility
http://www.schoening-online.com/

----- Original Message -----
From: Martin McCarthy <roland(at)ninehells.org>
To: HWG Critique <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Sunday, June 18, 2000 9:27 PM
Subject: Critique Request


> Hello all. I've completely revamped my site, in between working on
finishing
> up a project and starting a new project, and I was wondering if you could
> critique it. I've asked before, and used a lot of your suggestions to make
> it look, in my opinion at least, much better.
> TIA
> --
> Martin McCarthy
> Ninehells Design
> http://www.ninehells.org
>

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