Hi Stephanie,

Congrats!  Good job!

1.  It's simple to navigate - great.

2.  The buttons on the left are grey, the background is grey, yet you have
this beautiful blue color in the sky graphic that you don't use anywhere
else.  Perhaps change the grey buttons to a sky blue?  Besides, the color
choice would help visually tie the logo and the buttons together and also
help visually state that this is someone dealing with flight, which the
graphic at the top starts to do.

3.  Great job changing the button for the current page.  However, it doesn't
stand out as well as it could.  Maybe use the grey buttons for the highlight
(to mark the current page)?  You also have some red in there, maybe you
could pull that into the highlight...

4.  It took a LONG time to download.  I have DSL, and it still took well
over a minute.  I finally gave up looking at some of your other pages.
Maybe talk with your host/provider and see what the problem is.  It could
just be a bad time/day.   I surfed just before and just after looking at
your page and had no speed problems.

Good job!

Mary

----- Original Message -----
From: "Stephanie Thrasher" <steph(at)omsoft.com>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Tuesday, March 12, 2002 3:41 PM
Subject: Critique Request


> http://www.flightaudit.com/
>
> This is my very first paid Web site job.  I'd really appreciate any
comments
> or suggestions.
>
> thank you very much,
> Stephanie
>
>
>

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