Re: CYC site critique

Hi Shelly
MSIE 5.0 800X600 Win98se todays connection 33k

I like it. Excellent choice of colors, graphics good, loads quick at 33k the
only thing I would add to it is a price list with some type of order form.
Also maybe I am missing something, but what is the purpose of the link page.
If you want to explain what yellow cedar is
make another page and call it "What is Yellow Cedar" don't send people to
another site to explain your product
good luck
robert1


----- Original Message -----
From: Shelley Watson <shelleyw(at)home.com>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Friday, September 15, 2000 8:44 AM
Subject: CYC site critique


> Dear Folks  :)
>
> First time putting a site up for critique :)  I'm considering a
> redesign although the client is happy.  This site was developed
> over 3 months with bits and pieces of info sent over time so it
> was a challenge to pull it all together.  At the very least I
> have to restructure some of the content and change the Product
> link to About Us.  I'm also adding a page that contains
> information on yellow cedar and a slide show of their
> manufacturing plant.  What I had to begin with was the logo
> (flat, print media only) and a small company bio.  Then a few
> pictures of the plant.  Received the product pictures last, 3
> months after the initial start.  Site is located at:
> www.canadianyellowcedar.com and although there are things I'm
> thinking about for changes I would like to hear from others about
> what I can do to improve this site or if I should really consider
> starting from scratch.  :)
>
> Shelley
> shelleyw(at)home.com
>
>

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