Two Sites

Hi Critiquers,

I'm new to this list (I've been on -techniques and -business for quite a
while, but just joined this one) and am happy to be here!

I have a couple of sites I'd like critiqued.

The first was a volunteer assignment I did for my daughter's elementary
school and is at:
www.columbus.k12.oh.us/saleme
I'm not completely satisfied with the first page (and stay away from
animations on business sites but thought it might be fun for the kids).

The second is at:
www.technicallywrite.com
This person was looking for a clean, uncluttered site.

Well, here goes nothing! I've never asked for critiques before except from
the owner of the sites (who generally don't know much about good design), so
I'm donning my bullet proof vest :)

I have another I'm currently working on which I would love to have
critiqued, only the server's currently down, so I'll wait to send out that
address.

Thanks a million!
Kelly Williamson
kelly(at)williamson.net
Image Online Services
www.imageos.com

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