Re: Commercial Critique. (HolmComp.net)

by "Patrick McElhaney" <webmaster(at)htmltips.com>

Date:	Wed, 6 Jan 1999 11:25:50 +0200
To:	"John Holman" <jholman(at)HolmComp.net>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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> http://www.HolmComp.net


Don't have much to say abou this one. It's, simple, strait-forward, and
fast.

In my opinion, you've done everything right. It's easy to tell which page
I'm
on because the menu is consistent and highlights the current page. I
also like the use of the title attribute in your menu links to provide more
info about where each link goes.

I don't have to waste any clicks to get an overview of who you are. It's
all on the home page.

As I look more closely, I do see a couple of suggestions I can offer.

You didn't include "home" in the menu on the home page. Why don't
you add it. Leaving it out kind of messes up the consistancy I spoke
of earlier.

I'm not sure your explanation of different types of web hosting is
adequate. Maybe a chart for the right brained folks would help?

You use the same color (white) to for mouseovers as you have for
the current page. In my experience, the average user can get
confused over silly things like this.

Patrick
HTMLTips.Com

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