Re: Request for Critique

Hey!  What a fun page!

I noticed that your buttons on the left side jump around a bit.  I didn't
look at your code but perhaps your tables widths are different sizes or
something?  I thought your introduction (not the Green Acres part) but the
part about Crystal City really led into the subject matter quite well.  Why
not incorporate your photos into the main pages.  It would add a little more
color but reduce their sizes if you do.

I can see that this site will grow and grow!  Have fun with it!

Janet
----- Original Message -----
From: E Bedsworth <edmund.bedsworth(at)wcom.com>
To: Critique Requests <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Tuesday, February 29, 2000 4:31 PM
Subject: Request for Critique


> http://home.earthlink.net/~penthouseview
>
> Folks --
>
>     I'm coming out of the wood work for the first time to ask everyone to
take a
> look at my web site.  I'm fairly new to web development.  I have listened
to all
> your comments and tried to take everything into consideration.
>     A few specific things other than the usual requests......
>
>     1. There are two JavaScript pages currently in use.  I'm willing to
change
> to HTML if anyone can give me an idea how.  I tried to use an Animated GIF
but
> it ended up being too big.
>     2. I'm using tables to simulate Frames.  Some people don't like
frames,
> others say that reloading graphics with each page is too much, what do
y'all
> think on my site?
>     3. Content -- I know it's lacking, this is a personal site and we are
> working on it.  But is the look and feel consistant?
>
> THANKS
>
>
>

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