Re: Critique for http://home.earthlink.net/~jgillen/

Nice.  The first site posted in days that actually passes validation!  A
little overweighted with tables, but it does have a fair amount of
whitespace (not too cluttered to read).

Go easy on the graphics.  No sense in overdoing it and forcing folks to wait
for the actual content.

later,
gordon

-----Original Message-----
From: Joan Gillen <jgillen(at)earthlink.net>
To: HWG-Critique <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Date: Sunday, April 12, 1998 7:11 PM
Subject: Critique for http://home.earthlink.net/~jgillen/


>I offered to build a web page as a Christmas present to my daughter's
>Godfather. I've been lurking and re-doing these pages since January. I
>still have META TAGS that shoo instead of beckon the robots, but now that I
>*think* I've gotten the HTML straight, all opinions and suggestions are
>welcome.
>
>I'd rather be cut to ribbons by you folks than by business associates of my
>dear friend!
>
>Just got got my first graphics programs in March, so if you folks give me
>the HTML go-ahead, I'll start working on the decorations in earnest. If you
>have time, I'd appreciate it if you'd also check out the "Gambits" link
>from my pages.
>
>TIA,
>Joan Gillen
>mailto:jgillen(at)earthlink.net
>
>
>
>

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