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Re: Business Siteby "David Wilkerson" <wilkman97(at)email.msn.com> |
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Bill,
OK here goes my opinions so take them lightly......<grin>
1. I liked the mouseovers but with the little boxes on each side of the
central image I expected to see mouseovers on them....but nope.......maybe
I would have the rectangles images as links too.
2. The email link at the bottom to info(at)interworks.com........some browsers
do not support mailto: function so you should list the email address as a
link and make that the link.
3. It scrolls horizontally at 640 X 480 screen res.
4. I was going to say you should put links on "each" page to the other pages
but I now see that it is only a two page website........hmmmmmm.......my
thoughts is you should break this up into multiple pages with more content
and then maybe make a portfolio of links to some of your work..........if
you want to make it look more "businessy"......just my thoughts though!!
The website loaded rather quickly on my 200 MHz MMX with a 56K modem.
I hope this helps you out.
David Wilkerson
webmaster(at)beachboy.com
wilkman97(at)email.msn.com
http://www.beachboy.com
http://wwp.mirabilis.com/339944
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