Re: http://www.earthwisetours.com

Hi Jeffrey,

You have some great stuff here. The copy is nice and tight and in easy to
digest bits. The colours work, page loads very quickly.

I agree with the comment about tables. It is harder to read text that is
right across the page and the eye has a hard time finding a place to settle.
With your great short paragraphs and short sections, it is manageable as it
is, but would be easier with a column layout - look a little more
professional as well. The extra pages idea is also a good one. At least put
in a small text menu at the top with targets if you must keep the one page
format, and put a target back to the top with each section. People are only
prepared to scroll 2, maybe 3 screens before you are really risking losing
them.

Your title needs anti-aliasing. Did you create it in a vector program like
CorelDraw or Illustrator? On export, make sure that anti- aliasing is
checked. That will take the jagged edges away. Make sure it is on a similar
coloured background when you do this, though, since the program will borrow
pieces of the background to make the edges look smooth. If it is CorelDraw,
I have a written a series of 100 tutorials with exporting quite well
covered. http://wpeck.com/learn.

Great start though. Just a few "finishing" touches and you will have an easy
to use and very practical page for your client.

Now, how can I get some time to get out there to be your clients customer?
<g>.

Wendy

Wendy Peck: Marketing Solutions Through Technology
Integrated, custom marketing strategy packages and Web design
http://wpeck.com

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----- Original Message -----
From: Jeffrey Newman <newman(at)bcinternet.net>
To: Web Site Critique <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Sent: Thursday, January 27, 2000 2:37 AM
Subject: http://www.earthwisetours.com


Your comments on this new site which I designed would be greatly
appreciated.

http://www.earthwisetours.com
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Jeffrey Newman

JN Web Design
Phone: 1 250 791-9206
Fax:   1 250 791-9207
E-Mail: newman(at)bcinternet.net
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